EAE WRITE UP
Criteria For EAE Write Up
Excel in your write-up using the HBCA Method
Course Write Up - 600 Characters
Example 1
❌ Poor Write-Up
Watching my family being involved in business, I became interested in business. I took up Principles of Accounting to understand business more.
Since young, I would follow my mother around and watch as she interacted with her colleagues and guests in the hotel. I took up leadership roles in the student council where I was a committee head and later on Vice President. I would check on my councillors to ensure that they were alright and that everyone was comfortable with each other.
Joining the course will allow me to further my knowledge and contribute to the business field in future.
✅ Strong Write-Up Using HBCA Method
Witnessing my family members lose their jobs during the Financial Crisis made me realise the consequences of an economy meltdown.
..I hope to enter the wealth management industry to raise financial literacies amongst our community.
Example 2
❌ Bad Write-Up
I have always had a strong passion for biology and how the body works.
Firstly, I enjoy learning about chemistry and biology and I want to further develop my passion. My recent visit to the Science Centre grew my interest in science, and using lab apparatus further fuelled my interest.
Lastly, ever since the Covid-19 pandemic, I have witnessed healthcare workers sacrificing their family time to work around the clock daily to help others. Hence, I find it admirable and I aspire to be like them too.
Strong Write-Up Using HBCA Method
Strong Write-Up Using HBCA MethodThe mechanism of human diseases started to intrigue me as I suffered from Bell's Palsy in 2018. I experienced negative comments and it affected me both physically and emotionally.
I set off a journey to study biomedical science in ITE to learn more about human illnesses and diseases. I took part in a Science Competition in 2020 to raise awareness about Anti Microbial through Social Media campaigns.
Last year, I also worked as a medical swabber as I want to be part of the front-line medical workers in this pandemic. Through this course, I aspire to discover medical breakthroughs that can serve and impact the community.
Example 3
❌ Bad Write-Up
I yearn to join this course because technology is evolving fast and will be important in future. IT is fascinating as it has endless opportunities. Seeing my Father work in the IT sector has inspired me to be a part of the IT sector.
IT is something that I know I will thrive in and persevere regardless of any challenges, especially given my curious and never-give-up personality whenever I face challenging situations.
I am an independent learner and will do my best to excel in this course. I aspire to be a part of the IT industry
Strong Write-Up Using HBCA Method
With the rise of digital assets, many of my relatives have come across phishing scams. This infuriates me and drives me to protect my loved ones.
With the knowledge of Python, Java and Turtle, I have developed applications from Calculator to 2D Games. These experiences led me to receive a Silver Award in the STEM Young Engineer 2019.
In addition, I attended a Microsoft Tech Camp, DigiGirlz, and took courses on Malware Analysis and Penetration Testing.
Through this course, I hope to learn more about security infrastructure as I aspire to strengthen the data defence of our nation.
Talent Write Up - 1000 Words
Example 1
❌ Poor Write-Up
I believe I possess leadership qualities and communication skills because I was appointed leader for my Overseas Learning Trip group back in 2019.
We visited a neighbourhood school in Chiang Mai, Thailand to teach kids basic English and Mathematics. Since some kids were not as literate as others, we have to be patient while teaching them. As the team leader, I communicated with my group the best I could.
Furthermore, I was often praised by my teacher for showing exemplary performance in my CCA(Media Resource). I am confident that I am responsible as I was a former class chairman and was responsible for my class actions. Often times, my class would get reported for behaving poorly in class.
Hence, I would try my best to make my class behave and be a role model for my fellow classmates. Originally from soccer, I regard myself to have perseverance. During our soccer camp, we were mentally drained and physically tired. However, we all pulled through and learned to not give up.
Strong Write-Up
As a member of the Student Council Executive Committee, I have matured to become a tenacious, steadfast, all-rounded individual who strives to make a difference to the lives of the people around me.
My leadership abilities were tested when I entered the Temasek Leadership Showdown, a competition where I had to think on my feet. In the end, I emerged as the second-runner up and learned the importance of time management as I had to plan for events, create videos and conduct discussions in a short period of time.
Apart from my duties in school, I believe that I must be a valuable member of the community. Thus, I participated in voluntary events that honed my communication skills. My work was recognised and I was awarded the National Youth Achievement Award (Silver) and the RS Star Award for displaying a sense of Passion and Service for the community.
Hence, I believe that I will be a valuable member of any institution I am in as I am capable of leading and serving my school and community.
